Double Page Spread - Audience Opinion

After completing my front cover, contents page and double page spread I printed them off and asked my target audience their opinion on my work.
The things that my target audience said they liked were:

• the signatures on the article
• the alternating colours on the title and the rest of the text on the page
• and the positioning and the size of the image.

The things that my target audience said they disliked/ would change were:

• the introduction for the article is too long
• could add more colour onto the page
• and the clothing doesn't fit the colour scheme.

As these are things that my target audience would change I will try to make my double page spread suit my target audience better.